VIth blog for FMP (btw sorry about the delay)

Sorry for the delay, A blog catch up what I've done so far.

03/02/11

Today I saw Will today for a tutorial, discussed about the script needs to improve on ovearall, such as the structure was the main point, needs rethink of the strutre. Another thing the scipt needs to lose was the Family Guy/MP jokes (as the animatic below). However Will said the interaction between Donny is good thing in the script. So overall I need to improve the script.

05/02/11

Been doing another sketches of what Donny may look like in future. Also a possible idea what Pete might look like as well.

08/02/11

Max Hattler was in our class today, class show some of their work from the past two months so far. In the Afternoon, Max showed some of his own work he has done from his portfolio, one of them was a music video for Bassment Jaxx called 'Where's your head at' (2010) and other pervious projects such as 'Collision' (2005), which was quite impress from a professional video artist and experimental film maker.

Collision (by Max Hattler) from Max Hattler on Vimeo.

Basement Jaxx: Where's Your Head At (by Max Hattler) from Max Hattler on Vimeo.

I also, Uploaded my animatic (from last week) onto Facebook group, to get some feedback, someone mention they enjoyed the Family guy joke, apart from that comment there was no other feedback.

10/02/11

Now reworking the script again, responding from the negative feedback and improve on my script such as cutting out the Family Guy jokes altogether. Also, keeping the interaction between Donny and Pete, which came out positive from the pervious script.

15/02/11

Just finished off second attempted of my script. Showed it off to a few people to get some opinions, one of them to get an opinion was Will, early feedback is the script is much improve from the first script, I get propper feedback the weeks to come.

End of blog for now, new blog soon. Bye.