house on the hill project

First on all i'm dyslexic, so if I got my words in the wrong way round please be calm. I'm doing a project at college called 'house on the hill', and its a flash project. I have based a round as the snail symbols as the house on a mole hill. The story is a snail on a mole hill sleeping then waking up crossing the garden to see an energy can and he goes hyper. Then waking up again to see how smiley it is. And old man is grumpy gonna kill the snail . Then the snail drinks the energyy drink then leaves the end. One video is an animatic and other is the working process so far. your opinions please.

hi peeps

hi peeps